Demo story bible
Pride and Prejudice, as a story bible
The first twelve chapters of Jane Austen's novel, with every character, place and family filled in by hand: the names they go by, how they are related, what changes from chapter to chapter and who knows what. Browse it here, with no account.
- Entries
- 35
- Relationships
- 41
- Details
- 77
- Chapters
- 12
The novel and its story bible are in English, as Jane Austen wrote it. Only the page around them is translated.
The text is in the public domain: chapters I to XII of the 1894 George Allen edition, from Project Gutenberg. Every detail on this page was written by hand from it.
Entries
Every character, place and family
Each entry carries the names the novel uses for it, so Lore can find it in the chapters, and the details a writer wants to hand: an income, an age, a distance, a first name that turns up in a letter.
Characters
Mr. Bennet
Master of Longbourn and father of five daughters. Sharp, sarcastic and reserved, he would rather sit with a book than make matches, yet he is the first to call on Mr. Bingley.
First appears in Chapter I
Details
- Daughters
- five
- Estate
- two thousand a year, entailed in default of heirs male on a distant relation
- Character
- quick parts, sarcastic humour, reserve and caprice
- Married
- three-and-twenty years
- Called on Mr. Bingley
- among the first, without telling his family
Mrs. Bennet
Mr. Bennet's wife, whose business in life is to get her daughters married. Nervous, talkative and quick to take offence, she pins her hopes on Mr. Bingley for Jane.
First appears in Chapter I
Details
- Her father
- an attorney in Meryton
- Fortune
- four thousand pounds, left by her father
- Temper
- mean understanding, little information and uncertain temper
- Aim in life
- to get her daughters married
Elizabeth Bennet
Also: Elizabeth, Lizzy, Eliza, Miss Eliza Bennet, Miss Elizabeth Bennet
The second Bennet daughter and her father's favourite. Quick, playful and fond of anything ridiculous, she overhears Mr. Darcy call her merely tolerable and finds his pride hard to forgive.
First appears in Chapter I
Details
- Position
- second daughter
- Disposition
- lively and playful, delighting in anything ridiculous
- Riding
- no horsewoman
- Walk to Netherfield
- three miles, alone, in dirty weather
- Whereabouts
- Longbourn
- Opinion of Mr. Bingley's sisters
- proud and conceited; she is little disposed to approve them
Jane Bennet
Also: Jane, Miss Bennet
The eldest Bennet daughter, thought the beauty of the family. Gentle and slow to see a fault in anyone, she is admired by Mr. Bingley and falls ill while visiting Netherfield.
First appears in Chapter I
Details
- Position
- eldest daughter
- Character
- candid; never sees a fault in anybody
- Feelings for Mr. Bingley
- in a way to be very much in love, and hiding it
- Whereabouts
- Longbourn
Lydia Bennet
Also: Lydia
The youngest Bennet daughter, fifteen, tall, high-spirited and her mother's favourite. Since the militia came to Meryton she talks of little but officers.
First appears in Chapter I
Details
- Age
- fifteen
- Height
- the tallest of the sisters, though the youngest
- Mother's favourite
- yes, and brought into public early
Kitty Bennet
Also: Kitty, Catherine
The fourth Bennet daughter. With Lydia she walks into Meryton several times a week to visit their aunt and to hear about the officers.
First appears in Chapter II
Details
- Position
- one of the two youngest, with Lydia
- Habit
- coughs at the wrong moments
Mary Bennet
Also: Mary
The third Bennet daughter, studious and eager to display what she has learnt. She reads great books, makes extracts and plays long concertos.
First appears in Chapter II
Details
- Looks
- the only plain one in the family
- Reputation
- spoken of to Miss Bingley as the most accomplished girl in the neighbourhood
Mr. Bingley
Also: Bingley, Charles
The young, rich and easy-going new tenant of Netherfield Park. He dances every dance at the Meryton assembly, admires Jane Bennet and has promised a ball at Netherfield.
First appears in Chapter I
Details
- Income
- four or five thousand a year
- Party at the assembly
- five: Mr. Bingley, his two sisters, the husband of the eldest, and another young man
- Inheritance
- nearly a hundred thousand pounds from his father
- Age
- of age for less than two years when he took Netherfield
- Dances with Jane at the assembly
- twice, that is two pairs of dances
- Coat and horse
- a blue coat and a black horse
- Prettiest woman at the assembly
- the eldest Miss Bennet
- Family
- respectable, from the north of England; the fortune was made in trade
Mr. Darcy
Also: Darcy
Mr. Bingley's close friend: proud, reserved and very rich, with a large estate in Derbyshire. He slights Elizabeth at the assembly, then finds himself more and more drawn to her.
First appears in Chapter III
Details
- Income
- ten thousand a year
- Dances at the Meryton assembly
- only once with Mrs. Hurst and once with Miss Bingley
- Opinion of Elizabeth's looks
- tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt him
- What he said of Elizabeth at the assembly
- tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt him
- Estate
- a large estate in Derbyshire
- Temper
- resentful: his good opinion once lost is lost for ever
- Manner
- says little except among his intimate acquaintance
Miss Bingley
Also: Caroline
The younger of Mr. Bingley's two sisters, who keeps his house. Fashionable and proud, she courts Mr. Darcy's attention and grows jealous of Elizabeth.
First appears in Chapter III
Details
- Household
- lives with her brother and keeps his house
- First name
- Caroline
- Fortune
- twenty thousand pounds
- Education
- one of the first private seminaries in town
Mrs. Hurst
Also: Louisa
The elder of Mr. Bingley's two sisters, married to Mr. Hurst. She shares her sister's fashion and pride, and her laughter at the Bennets' relations in trade.
First appears in Chapter III
Details
- First name
- Louisa
- Married
- a man of more fashion than fortune
Mr. Hurst
Mrs. Hurst's husband, an indolent man who lives to eat, drink and play cards, and who has nothing to say to anyone who prefers a plain dish to a ragout.
First appears in Chapter III
Details
- Habits
- lives only to eat, drink and play at cards
Sir William Lucas
Also: Sir William
Once a tradesman and mayor of Meryton, knighted for an address to the king. He has retired to Lucas Lodge, where he is civil to all the world.
First appears in Chapter I
Details
- Former occupation
- in trade in Meryton
- Knighthood
- for an address to the king while mayor
Lady Lucas
Sir William's wife and Mrs. Bennet's neighbour and friend: a very good kind of woman, and not too clever.
First appears in Chapter I
Details
- Character
- a very good kind of woman, not too clever
Charlotte Lucas
Also: Charlotte, Miss Lucas
The eldest Lucas daughter, about twenty-seven, sensible and Elizabeth's closest friend. She holds that happiness in marriage is entirely a matter of chance.
First appears in Chapter III
Details
- Age
- about twenty-seven
- View of marriage
- happiness in marriage is entirely a matter of chance
Mrs. Long
A neighbour who brings the news that Netherfield is let. She has two nieces of her own, and Mrs. Bennet has no opinion of her.
First appears in Chapter I
Details
- Nieces
- two
Mrs. Philips
Mrs. Bennet's sister, married to Mr. Philips of Meryton. Kitty and Lydia call on her most days for news of the officers.
First appears in Chapter VII
Mr. Philips
An attorney in Meryton, once clerk to Mrs. Bennet's father and then his successor in the business. He has called on all the officers.
First appears in Chapter VII
Details
- Profession
- attorney: clerk to Mrs. Bennet's father, then his successor
Mr. Gardiner
Also: Gardiner
Mrs. Bennet's brother, settled in London in a respectable line of trade. Miss Bingley and Mrs. Hurst laugh that he lives somewhere near Cheapside.
First appears in Chapter VII
Details
- Occupation
- a respectable line of trade in London
Mr. Jones
The apothecary who attends Jane at Netherfield, prescribes draughts and says she must not be moved.
First appears in Chapter VII
Details
- Advice
- Jane must not be moved
Colonel Forster
An officer of the militia quartered at Meryton. Elizabeth teases him to give a ball, and by chapter XII it has been hinted that he is going to be married.
First appears in Chapter VI
Captain Carter
A militia officer whom Lydia admires. He leaves for London, and she hopes he will be back in Meryton in time for the Netherfield ball.
First appears in Chapter VII
Miss Darcy
Mr. Darcy's young sister, praised by Miss Bingley for her playing and her designs. In chapters I to XII she is only talked about, never seen.
First appears in Chapter VIII
Details
- Height
- about Elizabeth's height, or rather taller
- Accomplishments
- the pianoforte and the harp
Places
Netherfield Park
Also: Netherfield, Netherfield House
The house Mr. Bingley takes at the start of the novel, three miles from Longbourn. Jane stays there for almost a week while she is ill, with Elizabeth nursing her.
First appears in Chapter I
Details
- Distance from Longbourn
- three miles
- Taken
- by Mr. Bingley, after looking it over for half an hour
Longbourn
The village where the Bennets live and of which they are the principal inhabitants, one mile from Meryton.
First appears in Chapter III
Details
- Distance from Meryton
- one mile
Meryton
The small market town near Longbourn: home of the assemblies, of Mr. and Mrs. Philips and, this winter, of the militia's head-quarters.
First appears in Chapter IV
Details
- Kind of place
- a small market town
Lucas Lodge
Sir William Lucas's house, about a mile from Meryton and a short walk from Longbourn, where he gives a large party in chapter VI.
First appears in Chapter V
Details
- Distance from Meryton
- about a mile
Pemberley
Mr. Darcy's estate in Derbyshire. In chapters I to XII it is known only by report, chiefly for its library.
First appears in Chapter VI
Details
- Library
- the work of many generations
London
Where Mr. Bingley goes on business, where Mr. Darcy keeps a house and where Mrs. Bennet's brother lives in trade.
First appears in Chapter III
Cheapside
The part of London near which Mrs. Bennet's brother lives, to the amusement of Miss Bingley and Mrs. Hurst.
First appears in Chapter VIII
Hertfordshire
The county Mr. Bingley arrives in when he takes Netherfield.
First appears in Chapter III
Families
Bennet family
Also: the Bennets
Mr. and Mrs. Bennet and their five daughters, of Longbourn. The estate is entailed away from the daughters, and their mother's business in life is to see them married.
First appears in Chapter V
Lucas family
Also: the Lucases
Sir William and Lady Lucas and their several children, of Lucas Lodge: the Bennets' particular friends.
First appears in Chapter V
Details
- Children
- several; Charlotte is the eldest
Groups
The Netherfield party
Also: Netherfield party
Mr. Bingley, his two sisters, Mr. Hurst and Mr. Darcy: the five who come to the Meryton assembly together and who are, to the neighbourhood, one fashionable group.
First appears in Chapter III
Details
- Members
- five: Mr. Bingley, his two sisters, Mr. Hurst and Mr. Darcy
The militia regiment
Also: the regiment
A militia regiment quartered in the neighbourhood for the winter, with Meryton as head-quarters. Its officers dine with Mr. Philips and fill Kitty's and Lydia's conversation.
First appears in Chapter VII
Details
- Stay in the neighbourhood
- the whole winter, with Meryton as head-quarters
Relationships
Who is whose
These families are read straight from the relationships: a father and a mother of each daughter, a husband and a wife, a brother and a sister. Every relationship reads both ways.
Married
Mr. BennetMrs. Bennet
Children
- Jane Bennet
- Elizabeth Bennet
- Mary Bennet
- Kitty Bennet
- Lydia Bennet
Married
Mr. PhilipsMrs. Philips
Married
Sir William LucasLady Lucas
Children
- Charlotte Lucas
Married
Mrs. HurstMr. Hurst
Brothers and sisters
- Mrs. Philips
- Mrs. Bennet
- Mr. Gardiner
Brothers and sisters
- Mr. Bingley
- Miss Bingley
- Mrs. Hurst
Brothers and sisters
- Mr. Darcy
- Miss Darcy
All 41 relationships
| Entry | Relationship | With |
|---|---|---|
| Mr. Bennet | husband of | Mrs. Bennet |
| Mr. Bennet | father of | Jane Bennet |
| Mr. Bennet | father of | Elizabeth Bennet |
| Mr. Bennet | father of | Mary Bennet |
| Mr. Bennet | father of | Kitty Bennet |
| Mr. Bennet | father of | Lydia Bennet |
| Mrs. Bennet | mother of | Jane Bennet |
| Mrs. Bennet | mother of | Elizabeth Bennet |
| Mrs. Bennet | mother of | Mary Bennet |
| Mrs. Bennet | mother of | Kitty Bennet |
| Mrs. Bennet | mother of | Lydia Bennet |
| Mrs. Philips | sister of | Mrs. Bennet |
| Mr. Philips | husband of | Mrs. Philips |
| Mr. Gardiner | brother of | Mrs. Bennet |
| Sir William Lucas | husband of | Lady Lucas |
| Sir William Lucas | father of | Charlotte Lucas |
| Lady Lucas | mother of | Charlotte Lucas |
| Mr. Bingley | brother of | Miss Bingley |
| Mr. Bingley | brother of | Mrs. Hurst |
| Mrs. Hurst | sister of | Miss Bingley |
| Mrs. Hurst | wife of | Mr. Hurst |
| Mr. Darcy | brother of | Miss Darcy |
| Charlotte Lucas | intimate friend | Elizabeth Bennet |
| Mr. Darcy | friend of | Mr. Bingley |
| Colonel Forster | officer in | The militia regiment |
| Captain Carter | officer in | The militia regiment |
| Mr. Bingley | member of | The Netherfield party |
| Miss Bingley | member of | The Netherfield party |
| Mrs. Hurst | member of | The Netherfield party |
| Mr. Hurst | member of | The Netherfield party |
| Mr. Darcy | member of | The Netherfield party |
| Mr. Jones | attends | Jane Bennet |
| Bennet family | lives at | Longbourn |
| Lucas family | lives at | Lucas Lodge |
| Mr. Bingley | tenant of | Netherfield Park |
| Mr. Darcy | master of | Pemberley |
| Mrs. Philips | lives in | Meryton |
| Mr. Gardiner | lives near | Cheapside |
| The militia regiment | quartered at | Meryton |
| Cheapside | part of | London |
| Netherfield Park | in | Hertfordshire |
Progressions
What changes, and from which chapter
A progression records how an entry changes from a given chapter on. In these twelve chapters Darcy changes his mind about Elizabeth's looks, Jane falls ill and recovers, and Elizabeth changes her mind about Bingley's sisters twice.
Elizabeth BennetWhereabouts
- From the startLongbourn
- From Chapter VIINetherfield, nursing Jane
- From Chapter XIILongbourn
Elizabeth BennetOpinion of Mr. Bingley's sisters
- From the startproud and conceited; she is little disposed to approve them
- From Chapter VIIwarming to them for their care of Jane
- From Chapter VIIIher first dislike, restored by their indifference to Jane
Jane BennetWhereabouts
- From the startLongbourn
- From Chapter VIINetherfield, kept there by illness
- From Chapter XIILongbourn
Jane BennetHealth
- From Chapter VIIa violent cold, caught riding to Netherfield in the rain
- From Chapter Xrecovering; well enough to leave her room for an evening
Mr. DarcyOpinion of Elizabeth's looks
- From the starttolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt him
- From Chapter VIher face uncommonly intelligent, her dark eyes beautiful
POV knowledge
Who knows what, and from when
POV knowledge records what each point-of-view character knows about another entry, and from which chapter.
Elizabeth Bennet knows about Mr. Darcy
Elizabeth overhears Darcy call her tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt him.
From Chapter III
Mrs. Bennet knows about Mr. Darcy
Mrs. Bennet repeats the slight to her husband the same night.
From Chapter III
Charlotte Lucas knows about Mr. Darcy
Charlotte knows the story and teases Elizabeth with it the morning after.
From Chapter V
Miss Bingley knows about Mr. Darcy
Darcy tells Miss Bingley that the fine eyes he has been thinking of are Elizabeth's.
From Chapter VI
Elizabeth Bennet knows about Jane Bennet
Elizabeth sees that Jane is in a way to be very much in love, and that the world will not notice.
From Chapter VI
Charlotte Lucas knows about Jane Bennet
Elizabeth confides it to Charlotte, who thinks Jane hides it too well.
From Chapter VI
Mrs. Bennet knows about Mr. Bennet
Mr. Bennet keeps his call on Mr. Bingley from his wife until the evening after he has paid it.
From Chapter II
Charlotte Lucas knows about Mr. Bingley
Charlotte overhears Bingley tell Mr. Robinson that the eldest Miss Bennet was the prettiest woman in the room.
From Chapter V
Jane Bennet knows about Mr. Darcy
Miss Bingley has told Jane that Darcy says little except among his intimate acquaintance.
From Chapter V
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Mr. Bennet5 facts
Daughters: five
with the assistance of her five daughters
Chapter III Estate: two thousand a year, entailed in default of heirs male on a distant relation
an estate of two thousand a year, which, unfortunately for his daughters, was entailed, in default of heirs male, on a distant relation
Chapter VII Character: quick parts, sarcastic humour, reserve and caprice
so odd a mixture of quick parts, sarcastic humour, reserve, and caprice
Chapter I Married: three-and-twenty years
the experience of three-and-twenty years had been insufficient to make his wife understand his character
Chapter I Called on Mr. Bingley: among the first, without telling his family
Mr. Bennet was among the earliest of those who waited on Mr. Bingley.
Chapter II
Mrs. Bennet4 facts
Her father: an attorney in Meryton
Her father had been an attorney in Meryton
Chapter VII Fortune: four thousand pounds, left by her father
had left her four thousand pounds
Chapter VII Temper: mean understanding, little information and uncertain temper
She was a woman of mean understanding, little information, and uncertain temper.
Chapter I Aim in life: to get her daughters married
The business of her life was to get her daughters married
Chapter I
Elizabeth Bennet10 facts
Position: second daughter
Observing his second daughter employed in trimming a hat
Chapter II Disposition: lively and playful, delighting in anything ridiculous
a lively, playful disposition, which delighted in anything ridiculous
Chapter III Riding: no horsewoman
as she was no horsewoman, walking was her only alternative
Chapter VII Walk to Netherfield: three miles, alone, in dirty weather
walked three miles so early in the day in such dirty weather
Chapter VII Whereabouts: Longbourn
They returned, therefore, in good spirits to Longbourn, the village where they lived
Chapter III Whereabouts: Netherfield, nursing Jane
an invitation to remain at Netherfield for the present
Chapter VII Whereabouts: Longbourn
On Sunday, after morning service, the separation, so agreeable to almost all, took place.
Chapter XII Opinion of Mr. Bingley's sisters: proud and conceited; she is little disposed to approve them
she was very little disposed to approve them
Chapter IV Opinion of Mr. Bingley's sisters: warming to them for their care of Jane
Elizabeth began to like them herself, when she saw how much affection and solicitude they showed for Jane
Chapter VII Opinion of Mr. Bingley's sisters: her first dislike, restored by their indifference to Jane
restored Elizabeth to the enjoyment of all her original dislike
Chapter VIII
Jane Bennet8 facts
Position: eldest daughter
said Mr. Darcy, looking at the eldest Miss Bennet
Chapter III Character: candid; never sees a fault in anybody
You never see a fault in anybody.
Chapter IV Feelings for Mr. Bingley: in a way to be very much in love, and hiding it
Jane was yielding to the preference which she had begun to entertain for him from the first, and was in a way to be very much in love
Chapter VI Whereabouts: Longbourn
They returned, therefore, in good spirits to Longbourn, the village where they lived
Chapter III Whereabouts: Netherfield, kept there by illness
Jane certainly could not come back.
Chapter VII Whereabouts: Longbourn
On Sunday, after morning service, the separation, so agreeable to almost all, took place.
Chapter XII Health: a violent cold, caught riding to Netherfield in the rain
she had caught a violent cold
Chapter VII Health: recovering; well enough to leave her room for an evening
Jane was already so much recovered as to intend leaving her room for a couple of hours that evening
Chapter X
Lydia Bennet3 facts
Age: fifteen
Lydia was a stout, well-grown girl of fifteen
Chapter IX Height: the tallest of the sisters, though the youngest
I’m the tallest.
Chapter II Mother's favourite: yes, and brought into public early
a favourite with her mother, whose affection had brought her into public at an early age
Chapter IX
Kitty Bennet2 facts
Position: one of the two youngest, with Lydia
The two youngest of the family, Catherine and Lydia
Chapter VII Habit: coughs at the wrong moments
Kitty has no discretion in her coughs
Chapter II
Mary Bennet2 facts
Looks: the only plain one in the family
in consequence of being the only plain one in the family
Chapter VI Reputation: spoken of to Miss Bingley as the most accomplished girl in the neighbourhood
the most accomplished girl in the neighbourhood
Chapter III
Mr. Bingley8 facts
Income: four or five thousand a year
A single man of large fortune; four or five thousand a year.
Chapter I Party at the assembly: five: Mr. Bingley, his two sisters, the husband of the eldest, and another young man
it consisted of only five altogether
Chapter III Inheritance: nearly a hundred thousand pounds from his father
Mr. Bingley inherited property to the amount of nearly a hundred thousand pounds from his father
Chapter IV Age: of age for less than two years when he took Netherfield
Mr. Bingley had not been of age two years when he was tempted
Chapter IV Dances with Jane at the assembly: twice, that is two pairs of dances
Mr. Bingley had danced with her twice
Chapter III Coat and horse: a blue coat and a black horse
he wore a blue coat and rode a black horse
Chapter III Prettiest woman at the assembly: the eldest Miss Bennet
Oh, the eldest Miss Bennet, beyond a doubt
Chapter V Family: respectable, from the north of England; the fortune was made in trade
their brother’s fortune and their own had been acquired by trade
Chapter IV
Mr. Darcy8 facts
Income: ten thousand a year
of his having ten thousand a year
Chapter III Dances at the Meryton assembly: only once with Mrs. Hurst and once with Miss Bingley
Mr. Darcy danced only once with Mrs. Hurst and once with Miss Bingley
Chapter III Opinion of Elizabeth's looks: tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt him
She is tolerable: but not handsome enough to tempt
Chapter III Opinion of Elizabeth's looks: her face uncommonly intelligent, her dark eyes beautiful
the beautiful expression of her dark eyes
Chapter VI What he said of Elizabeth at the assembly: tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt him
She is tolerable: but not handsome enough to tempt
Chapter III Estate: a large estate in Derbyshire
not all his large estate in Derbyshire could save him
Chapter III Temper: resentful: his good opinion once lost is lost for ever
My good opinion once lost is lost for ever.
Chapter XI Manner: says little except among his intimate acquaintance
he never speaks much unless among his intimate acquaintance
Chapter V
Miss Bingley4 facts
Household: lives with her brother and keeps his house
Miss Bingley is to live with her brother, and keep his house
Chapter IV First name: Caroline
“CAROLINE BINGLEY.”
Chapter VII Fortune: twenty thousand pounds
had a fortune of twenty thousand pounds
Chapter IV Education: one of the first private seminaries in town
had been educated in one of the first private seminaries in town
Chapter IV
Mrs. Hurst2 facts
First name: Louisa
“She did indeed, Louisa.
Chapter VIII Married: a man of more fashion than fortune
who had married a man of more fashion than fortune
Chapter IV
Mr. Hurst1 facts
Habits: lives only to eat, drink and play at cards
he was an indolent man, who lived only to eat, drink, and play at cards
Chapter VIII
Sir William Lucas2 facts
Former occupation: in trade in Meryton
Sir William Lucas had been formerly in trade in Meryton
Chapter V Knighthood: for an address to the king while mayor
risen to the honour of knighthood by an address to the king during his mayoralty
Chapter V
Lady Lucas1 facts
Character: a very good kind of woman, not too clever
Lady Lucas was a very good kind of woman, not too clever to be a valuable neighbour to Mrs. Bennet.
Chapter V
Charlotte Lucas2 facts
Age: about twenty-seven
a sensible, intelligent young woman, about twenty-seven
Chapter V View of marriage: happiness in marriage is entirely a matter of chance
Happiness in marriage is entirely a matter of chance.
Chapter VI
Mrs. Long1 facts
Nieces: two
She has two nieces of her own.
Chapter II
Mr. Philips1 facts
Profession: attorney: clerk to Mrs. Bennet's father, then his successor
who had been a clerk to their father and succeeded him in the business
Chapter VII
Mr. Gardiner1 facts
Occupation: a respectable line of trade in London
a brother settled in London in a respectable line of trade
Chapter VII
Mr. Jones1 facts
Advice: Jane must not be moved
Mr. Jones says we must not think of moving her.
Chapter IX
Miss Darcy2 facts
Height: about Elizabeth's height, or rather taller
She is now about Miss Elizabeth Bennet’s height, or rather taller.
Chapter VIII Accomplishments: the pianoforte and the harp
her improvement on the harp
Chapter X
Netherfield Park2 facts
Distance from Longbourn: three miles
The distance is nothing, when one has a motive; only three miles.
Chapter VII Taken: by Mr. Bingley, after looking it over for half an hour
He did look at it, and into it, for half an hour
Chapter IV
Longbourn1 facts
Distance from Meryton: one mile
The village of Longbourn was only one mile from Meryton
Chapter VII
Meryton1 facts
Kind of place: a small market town
his residence in a small market town
Chapter V
Lucas Lodge1 facts
Distance from Meryton: about a mile
a house about a mile from Meryton
Chapter V
Pemberley1 facts
Library: the work of many generations
it has been the work of many generations
Chapter VIII
Lucas family1 facts
Children: several; Charlotte is the eldest
They had several children. The eldest of them
Chapter V
The Netherfield party1 facts
Members: five: Mr. Bingley, his two sisters, Mr. Hurst and Mr. Darcy
Mr. Bingley, his two sisters, the husband of the eldest, and another young man
Chapter III
The militia regiment1 facts
Stay in the neighbourhood: the whole winter, with Meryton as head-quarters
it was to remain the whole winter, and Meryton was the head-quarters
Chapter VII
Knowledge
Coming soonSecrets and false beliefs
Not only who knows, but who has it wrong, who only suspects, and what the reader knows that a character does not.
The readerknows
The narrator tells the reader that Darcy now finds Elizabeth's face uncommonly intelligent.
he began to find it was rendered uncommonly intelligent by the beautiful expression of her dark eyes
Chapter VI Elizabeth Bennethas it wrong
Elizabeth is perfectly unaware of the change, and still thinks he finds her plain.
Believes: he does not think her handsome enough to dance with
Of this she was perfectly unaware: to her he was only the man who made himself agreeable nowhere
Chapter VI Miss Bingleysuspects
Miss Bingley sees, or suspects, enough to be jealous.
Believes: he is falling in love with Elizabeth
Miss Bingley saw, or suspected, enough to be jealous
Chapter X Lydia Bennetsuspects
Kitty and Lydia bring home a hint that Colonel Forster is going to be married. It is only a hint.
Believes: he is going to be married
it had actually been hinted that Colonel Forster was going to be married
Chapter XII
Story time
Coming soonThe timeline
The events of chapters I to XII in order. The novel pins down the days only for the week at Netherfield, which begins on a Tuesday: day 0 is Jane's ride in the rain.
Chapter I
Day not given
Netherfield Park is let
A young man of large fortune from the north of England takes Netherfield, and Mrs. Long brings the news to Longbourn.
At Netherfield Park. Off the page. With: Mr. Bingley, Mrs. Long
Chapter II
Day not given
Mr. Bennet calls on Mr. Bingley
Mr. Bennet calls among the first, and tells his family only the next evening.
At Netherfield Park. Off the page. With: Mr. Bennet, Mr. Bingley
Chapter III
Day not given
Mr. Bingley returns the call
Bingley sits ten minutes in Mr. Bennet's library; the daughters see from an upper window that he wears a blue coat.
At Longbourn. With: Mr. Bingley, Mr. Bennet
Chapter III
Day not given
The Meryton assembly
Bingley dances twice with Jane; Darcy dances only with his own party and calls Elizabeth tolerable.
At Meryton. With: Mr. Bingley, Mr. Darcy, Jane Bennet, Elizabeth Bennet, Mrs. Bennet
Chapter V
Day not given
The Lucases call to talk over the ball
The morning after the assembly, the Lucas girls come to Longbourn to compare what they overheard.
At Longbourn. With: Charlotte Lucas, Mrs. Bennet, Elizabeth Bennet
Chapter VI
Day not given
A party at Lucas Lodge
Elizabeth sings, Mary plays, Sir William presents Elizabeth to Darcy as a partner, and she refuses to dance.
At Lucas Lodge. With: Sir William Lucas, Mr. Darcy, Elizabeth Bennet, Mary Bennet, Miss Bingley
Chapter VII
Day 0
Tuesday
Jane rides to Netherfield in the rain
Invited to dine by Miss Bingley, Jane is sent on horseback, is caught in the rain and has to stay the night.
At Netherfield Park. With: Jane Bennet, Mrs. Bennet
Mrs. Bennet expects her daughters home the following Tuesday, which would exactly finish Jane's week (chapter XII).
Chapter VII
Day 1
Wednesday
Elizabeth walks to Netherfield
Jane's note arrives at breakfast; Elizabeth walks three miles across the fields, and is invited to stay.
At Netherfield Park. With: Elizabeth Bennet, Jane Bennet, Kitty Bennet, Lydia Bennet
The day after Jane's ride. Chapter XII's news from the regiment runs since the preceding Wednesday.
Chapter IX
Day 2
Mrs. Bennet visits Netherfield
Mrs. Bennet finds Jane not dangerously ill, will not hear of her moving, and Lydia reminds Bingley of his ball.
At Netherfield Park. With: Mrs. Bennet, Lydia Bennet, Kitty Bennet, Mr. Bingley
Chapter X
Day 2
Darcy writes to his sister
That evening Miss Bingley praises Darcy's letter-writing, and he asks Elizabeth to dance a reel.
At Netherfield Park. With: Mr. Darcy, Miss Bingley, Elizabeth Bennet
Chapter X
Day 3
A walk in the shrubbery
Miss Bingley teases Darcy about marrying into the Bennets; Mrs. Hurst takes his other arm, and Elizabeth runs off on her own.
At Netherfield Park. With: Miss Bingley, Mr. Darcy, Mrs. Hurst, Elizabeth Bennet
Chapter XI
Day 3
Jane comes down to the drawing-room
Jane spends the evening downstairs; Miss Bingley takes Elizabeth for a turn about the room.
At Netherfield Park. With: Jane Bennet, Mr. Bingley, Mr. Darcy
Chapter XII
Day 5
Sunday
Jane and Elizabeth return to Longbourn
After a Saturday in which Darcy scarcely speaks to Elizabeth, the sisters leave Netherfield on Sunday after morning service.
At Longbourn. With: Jane Bennet, Elizabeth Bennet, Mr. Bennet
Stated in chapter XII.
Plot threads
Coming soonPlot threads
The stories still open at the end of chapter XII, each with the beats that move it on. None is resolved yet, and the demo does not say how they end.
Jane and Mr. Bingley
Romance · Advancing
Bingley admires Jane from the first ball; Jane loves him and hides it, which Charlotte warns may cost her.
- Chapter IIISet-up: Bingley dances with Jane twice at the assembly, and asks no one else a second time.
- Chapter IVAdvance: Alone with Elizabeth, Jane admits how much she admires him.
- Chapter VIComplication: Charlotte warns that a woman who hides her affection may lose the man.
- Chapter VIIAdvance: Sent on horseback in the rain, Jane falls ill at Netherfield and has to stay.
- Chapter XIAdvance: When Jane comes down, Bingley sits by her and talks to scarcely anyone else.
Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy
Main plot · Advancing
A slight at the first ball, a change of heart she knows nothing about, and a running argument about pride.
- Chapter IIISet-up: Darcy refuses to dance with Elizabeth and she overhears why.
- Chapter VIReversal: Darcy begins to find her face uncommonly intelligent.
- Chapter VIComplication: At Lucas Lodge he asks her to dance and she refuses.
- Chapter XAdvance: Darcy has never been so bewitched by any woman.
- Chapter XIAdvance: Their argument about pride and resentment ends in a smile.
- Chapter XIIComplication: Alarmed by his own feelings, Darcy barely speaks to her on her last day.
Miss Bingley's hopes of Mr. Darcy
Subplot · Stalled
Miss Bingley sets out to win Darcy and to make him dislike Elizabeth; neither works.
- Chapter VIIISet-up: At dinner Miss Bingley is wholly taken up with Darcy.
- Chapter XComplication: She sees enough to be jealous of Elizabeth.
- Chapter XAdvance: She tries to provoke Darcy by teasing him about marrying into the Bennet family.
- Chapter XIComplication: Her turn about the room with Elizabeth makes Darcy look up.
The Netherfield ball
Set-up and payoff · Open
Bingley talks of a ball at Netherfield on the first night; by chapter XI it is a settled thing, and the date is not yet fixed.
- Chapter IIISet-up: At the assembly Bingley talks of giving a ball himself at Netherfield.
- Chapter IXAdvance: Lydia holds him to his promise; he lets her name the day once Jane is well.
- Chapter XIAdvance: Bingley tells his sister the ball is settled.
The entail on Longbourn
Set-up and payoff · Open
Longbourn will pass to a distant male relation, not to any of the five daughters. The relation is not named in chapters I to XII.
- Chapter VIISet-up: The estate is entailed, in default of heirs male, on a distant relation.
The militia in Meryton
Subplot · Open
A regiment winters at Meryton, and the two youngest Bennets can talk of nothing but officers.
- Chapter VIISet-up: A militia regiment arrives to spend the winter, with Meryton as head-quarters.
- Chapter VIIAdvance: Lydia admires Captain Carter, who is leaving for London.
- Chapter XIIClue: A hint comes home that Colonel Forster is going to be married.
Continuity
Coming soonContinuity Guard
We planted contradictions by pretending a writer had changed a sentence, and picked real passages that only look wrong. A good check flags the first kind and leaves the second alone.
Planted changes: flagged
The changed sentence
That she should have walked thirty miles so early in the day in such dirty weather, and by herself, was almost incredible to Mrs. Hurst and Miss Bingley
It contradicts
Elizabeth Bennet, Walk to Netherfield: three miles, alone, in dirty weather
walked three miles so early in the day in such dirty weather
Chapter VII Netherfield is three miles from Longbourn: Elizabeth says so herself before she sets out.
The changed sentence
he had removed with his family to a house about twenty miles from Meryton, denominated from that period Lucas Lodge
It contradicts
Lucas Lodge, Distance from Meryton: about a mile
a house about a mile from Meryton
Chapter V Lucas Lodge is about a mile from Meryton, and within a short walk of Longbourn.
The changed sentence
Her father had been a sea captain in Brighton, and had left her four thousand pounds.
It contradicts
Mrs. Bennet, Her father: an attorney in Meryton
Her father had been an attorney in Meryton
Chapter VII Mrs. Bennet's father was an attorney in Meryton; Mr. Philips was his clerk and took over the business.
The changed sentence
Of this she was perfectly aware: to her he was only the man who made himself agreeable nowhere
It contradicts
Mr. Darcy, Opinion of Elizabeth's looks: her face uncommonly intelligent, her dark eyes beautiful
the beautiful expression of her dark eyes
Chapter VI Elizabeth does not know that Darcy's opinion has changed. The knowledge table has her believing he finds her merely tolerable.
Real passages: left alone
- A rumour or an opinion
a report soon followed that Mr. Bingley was to bring twelve ladies and seven gentlemen with him to the assembly
Chapter III A rumour, corrected in the same paragraph: the party that entered the room was five.
- Explained by the text
She danced four dances with him at Meryton
Chapter VI Chapter III says Bingley danced with Jane twice. Dances went in pairs: he asked her for the two next, and later the two fifth, so twice is four dances.
- A real change
he began to find it was rendered uncommonly intelligent by the beautiful expression of her dark eyes.
Chapter VI Darcy's opinion of Elizabeth's looks really changes in chapter VI. The earlier value holds until then, so there is nothing to fix.
- A rumour or an opinion
To walk three miles, or four miles, or five miles, or whatever it is, above her ancles in dirt
Chapter VIII Miss Bingley's sneer, not a measurement: she does not care how far it is.
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